Submitted Writing
Jade's Take on r a p e
- Rating: 4 - Lacking
Hmm, interesting really in that I take this to be a suicide type poem... what I did find annoying about the entire things is this, while the writing made sense... showing someone disturbed and weak in the mind enough to take their own life as they are being ignored by a boyfriend, the spelling totally took away my attention from the piece. The title confused me unless perhaps the poet meant the mind of the victim in the little tale was being raped perhaps? not sure on that. Has potential to be a good poem if worked on and maybe more thought out and spell checked.
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